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We will leave Danglars struggling with the demon of hatred, and endeavoring to insinuate in the ear of the shipowner some evil suspicions against his comrade, and follow Dantès, who, after having traversed La Canebière, took the Rue de Noailles, and entering a small house, on the left of the Allées de Meilhan, rapidly ascended four flights of a dark staircase, holding the baluster with one hand, while with the other he repressed the beatings of his heart, and paused before a half-open door, from which he could see the whole of a small room. This room was occupied by Dantès’ father. The news of the arrival of the _Pharaon_ had not yet reached the old man, who, mounted on a chair, was amusing himself by training with trembling hand the nasturtiums and sprays of clematis that clambered over the trellis at his window. Suddenly, he felt an arm thrown around his body, and a well-known voice behind him exclaimed, “Father—dear father!” The old man uttered a cry, and turned round; then, seeing his son, he fell into his arms, pale and trembling. “What ails you, my dearest father? Are you ill?” inquired the young man, much alarmed. “No, no, my dear Edmond—my boy—my son!—no; but I did not expect you; and joy, the surprise of seeing you so suddenly—Ah, I feel as if I were going to die.” “Come, come, cheer up, my dear father! ’Tis I—really I! They say joy never hurts, and so I came to you...
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Summary
Edmond Dantès arrives in Marseille aboard the merchant ship Pharaon, having taken command after the captain's death during their voyage. The young sailor carries out his final duties, delivering a letter to Napoleon's supporters on the island of Elba - a dangerous task that will soon destroy his life, though he doesn't know it yet. Meanwhile, his shipowner Morrel praises Edmond's competence and hints at a promotion to captain. Edmond's heart soars with the possibility, thinking of how this advancement would let him marry his beloved Mercédès sooner. But his moment of triumph attracts the wrong kind of attention. Danglars, the ship's jealous supercargo who wanted the captain position for himself, watches Edmond's success with growing resentment. The chapter establishes the cruel irony that will drive the entire story: Edmond's very virtues - his loyalty, competence, and honor - become the weapons his enemies use against him. His willingness to fulfill a dying captain's request, his skill as a sailor, and his bright future all paint a target on his back. Dumas shows us how quickly fortune can turn, and how the same qualities that elevate us can also make us vulnerable to those who feel threatened by our success. This chapter matters because it captures that universal moment when everything seems possible, right before life teaches us how fragile happiness really is. For anyone who's ever felt the sting of workplace jealousy or wondered why doing the right thing sometimes leads to punishment, Edmond's situation will feel painfully familiar.
That's what happens. To understand what the author is really doing—and to discuss this chapter with confidence—keep reading.
Terms to Know
Supercargo
A ship officer responsible for the commercial concerns of the voyage - basically the business manager who handles cargo, sales, and profits. Danglars holds this position on the Pharaon. It's a role that requires trust but also breeds resentment when others get promoted above you.
Modern Usage:
Like a regional sales manager who thinks they deserve the district manager job that went to someone younger.
Napoleonic sympathizers
People who still supported Napoleon Bonaparte even after his exile to Elba in 1814. Being caught helping Napoleon's cause could mean prison or death. Edmond unknowingly becomes involved by delivering a letter to these supporters.
Modern Usage:
Like being asked to pass along a message for someone without knowing it's for a political group that's being watched by the FBI.
Workplace jealousy
The resentment that builds when someone else gets recognition, promotions, or opportunities you think you deserve. Danglars represents this perfectly - watching Edmond's success with growing bitterness. It's one of the most destructive forces in any workplace.
Modern Usage:
That coworker who undermines you because you got the promotion they wanted, or spreads rumors because the boss praised your work.
Fatal loyalty
When doing the right thing by someone leads to your downfall. Edmond's willingness to honor his dying captain's final request becomes the very thing that destroys his life. Sometimes our best qualities become our greatest vulnerabilities.
Modern Usage:
Like covering for a friend who asked you to lie to their spouse, only to get caught up in their divorce proceedings.
Dramatic irony
When readers know something terrible is coming but the character doesn't. We can see Danglars plotting while Edmond celebrates his future. This creates tension because we want to warn the character but can't.
Modern Usage:
Like watching someone post happy vacation photos while their partner is texting their ex - you can see the disaster coming.
Social climbing
The attempt to rise in social status through marriage, career advancement, or connections. Edmond dreams of becoming captain so he can marry Mercédès and improve their life together. In 1800s France, your job determined everything about your social position.
Modern Usage:
Like working overtime for that promotion so you can afford the engagement ring and the wedding your girlfriend deserves.
Characters in This Chapter
Edmond Dantès
Protagonist
A young sailor who has just taken command of the ship after the captain's death. He's competent, loyal, and excited about his future with Mercédès. His very success and good nature make him a target for jealous enemies.
Modern Equivalent:
The hardworking guy who gets promoted and thinks everyone's happy for him, not realizing some coworkers are plotting against him.
Danglars
Antagonist
The ship's supercargo who resents Edmond's rapid rise and natural leadership abilities. He represents workplace jealousy at its most dangerous - the person who will destroy you because they can't stand your success.
Modern Equivalent:
The bitter coworker who's been passed over for promotion and decides to sabotage the person who got ahead.
Morrel
Mentor figure
The ship owner who recognizes Edmond's abilities and considers promoting him to captain. He represents the kind of boss who rewards merit, but whose praise can also paint a target on your back among jealous colleagues.
Modern Equivalent:
The good boss who wants to promote you but doesn't realize how much that's going to anger your resentful teammates.
Mercédès
Love interest
Edmond's fiancée, who represents everything he's working toward. His dreams of marriage and a better life motivate all his ambitions. She embodies the future that jealous enemies will try to steal from him.
Modern Equivalent:
The girlfriend you're planning to propose to once you get that promotion and can afford the life you both want.
Why This Matters
Connect literature to life
This chapter teaches how to identify when your success triggers others' insecurity and predict their likely responses.
Practice This Today
This week, notice when someone's tone changes after you share good news—that shift reveals who sees your win as their loss.
You have the foundation. Now let's look closer.
Key Quotes & Analysis
"I was charged to deliver this letter to Marshal Bertrand and to give him the packet which was entrusted to me."
Context: Edmond explaining to Morrel why he stopped at Elba during their voyage.
This innocent explanation reveals how Edmond has unknowingly become involved in dangerous political activity. His honesty about following the dying captain's orders shows his character, but also his naivety about the consequences.
In Today's Words:
My boss asked me to drop this off, so I did what he said.
"Dantès has all the qualities of a good captain."
Context: The ship owner praising Edmond's abilities and considering him for promotion.
This praise seals Edmond's fate by making his success visible to jealous enemies. Sometimes the recognition we crave most becomes the thing that destroys us, especially when others feel threatened by our advancement.
In Today's Words:
This guy has everything it takes to run the department.
"Oh, if I could but be captain at twenty!"
Context: Edmond dreaming about the promotion and what it would mean for his future with Mercédès.
This shows Edmond's ambition and optimism, but also his youth and inexperience with how cruel people can be when they feel threatened. His joy makes what's coming even more tragic.
In Today's Words:
Man, if I could get promoted this young, I'd have it made!
Intelligence Amplifier™ Analysis
The Road of Rising Targets
Success inevitably creates enemies who weaponize your virtues against you.
Thematic Threads
Class
In This Chapter
Edmond's potential rise from sailor to captain threatens the established hierarchy
Development
Building from chapter 1's introduction of social stratification
In Your Life:
You might face resistance when trying to move beyond your expected station in life
Jealousy
In This Chapter
Danglars' resentment of Edmond's competence and upcoming promotion
Development
Introduced here as a driving force of conflict
In Your Life:
You might recognize this in coworkers who undermine your achievements or family who resent your progress
Loyalty
In This Chapter
Edmond's faithful delivery of the captain's letter despite potential danger
Development
Established as Edmond's defining virtue that will become his vulnerability
In Your Life:
You might find that doing the right thing sometimes puts you at risk with those in power
Vulnerability
In This Chapter
Edmond's happiness and openness make him an easy target for enemies
Development
Introduced as the flip side of his virtuous nature
In Your Life:
You might notice that your moments of greatest joy often coincide with your greatest exposure to attack
Merit vs Politics
In This Chapter
Edmond earns promotion through skill while Danglars plots through manipulation
Development
Introduced here as competing paths to advancement
In Your Life:
You might struggle with whether to rely on hard work or play political games to get ahead
Modern Adaptation
When the Promotion Goes Sideways
Following Edmond's story...
Edmond returns to his old shipping company after his release, now wealthy enough to buy it outright. The dockworkers who once respected him now whisper about his 'dirty money' and 'criminal connections.' His former supervisor Martinez, who testified against him years ago, watches nervously as Edmond tours the facility with calm precision. Edmond's assistant mentions expanding operations, creating new jobs—exactly what this struggling port needs. But Martinez sees only threat. He starts spreading rumors about Edmond's 'real intentions,' suggesting the expansion is a front for money laundering. Other workers, already resentful of Edmond's transformation from their peer to their potential boss, begin to listen. The same loyalty that once made Edmond cover for a supervisor's mistake—the incident that led to his wrongful conviction—now makes him a target again. His competence threatens their sense of security. His success highlights their stagnation. His return forces them to confront their own complicity in his downfall. What should be a homecoming becomes psychological warfare.
The Road
The road Edmond Dantès walked in 1844, Edmond walks today. The pattern is identical: virtue becomes vulnerability when others need you to fail to feel secure about themselves.
The Map
This chapter provides the Rising Target Recognition System—the ability to predict when success will trigger backlash and from whom. Edmond can now map the emotional landscape before making moves.
Amplification
Before reading this, Edmond might have expected gratitude for bringing jobs back to the community. Now he can NAME the resentment, PREDICT the sabotage attempts, and NAVIGATE by building alliances while documenting everything.
You now have the context. Time to form your own thoughts.
Discussion Questions
- 1
What specific actions does Edmond take in this chapter that show his competence as a sailor, and how does Morrel respond to these actions?
analysis • surface - 2
Why does Danglars feel threatened by Edmond's success, and what does this reveal about how workplace dynamics actually work?
analysis • medium - 3
Think about your own workplace or school - where have you seen someone's success create resentment or jealousy in others? What patterns do you notice?
application • medium - 4
If you were Edmond and sensed Danglars' hostility, what specific steps would you take to protect yourself while still pursuing your goals?
application • deep - 5
What does this chapter suggest about the relationship between virtue and vulnerability - why do our strengths sometimes become our greatest weaknesses?
reflection • deep
Critical Thinking Exercise
Map Your Rising Target Moments
Think of a time when your success or achievement created tension with others. Write down what you accomplished, who seemed threatened, and what specific qualities of yours they targeted. Then identify three early warning signs that someone feels threatened by your success.
Consider:
- •Notice if the criticism focuses on your character rather than your actions
- •Pay attention to whether they try to minimize your achievements or find alternative explanations
- •Observe if they start treating your strengths as character flaws
Journaling Prompt
Write about a current situation where you're succeeding but sensing resistance. What would you do differently now that you understand the Rising Target Effect?
Coming Up Next...
Chapter 3: The Catalans
The next chapter brings new insights and deeper understanding. Continue reading to discover how timeless patterns from this classic literature illuminate our modern world and the choices we face.