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CHAPTER XXIII From Górki, Bennigsen descended the highroad to the bridge which, when they had looked at it from the hill, the officer had pointed out as being the center of our position and where rows of fragrant new-mown hay lay by the riverside. They rode across that bridge into the village of Borodinó and thence turned to the left, passing an enormous number of troops and guns, and came to a high knoll where militiamen were digging. This was the redoubt, as yet unnamed, which afterwards became known as the Raévski Redoubt, or the Knoll Battery, but Pierre paid no special attention to it. He did not know that it would become more memorable to him than any other spot on the plain of Borodinó. They then crossed the hollow to Semënovsk, where the soldiers were dragging away the last logs from the huts and barns. Then they rode downhill and uphill, across a ryefield trodden and beaten down as if by hail, following a track freshly made by the artillery over the furrows of the plowed land, and reached some flèches * which were still being dug. * A kind of entrenchment. At the flèches Bennigsen stopped and began looking at the Shevárdino Redoubt opposite, which had been ours the day before and where several horsemen could be descried. The officers said that either Napoleon or Murat was there, and they all gazed eagerly at this little group of horsemen. Pierre also looked at them, trying to guess...
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Summary
Pierre continues his battlefield tour with General Bennigsen as they inspect Russian positions before the Battle of Borodino. They ride across the landscape, passing troops and fortifications, including what will become the famous Raevski Redoubt. Pierre struggles to understand the military strategy being explained to him, feeling inadequate when Bennigsen questions his interest. The group spots enemy horsemen in the distance, possibly Napoleon himself, adding tension to the reconnaissance. At the left flank, Bennigsen becomes agitated about troop positioning, loudly criticizing what he sees as a tactical blunder - Russian forces positioned below a commanding hill rather than on top of it. He orders the troops moved to higher ground, despite not being the overall commander. Pierre finds himself agreeing with Bennigsen's criticism, which only increases his self-doubt about understanding military matters. However, the narrator reveals what neither Pierre nor Bennigsen knows: the troops were deliberately positioned as a hidden ambush, not as defenders. Bennigsen's 'correction' actually ruins a carefully planned tactical surprise. This chapter brilliantly illustrates how partial knowledge can be more dangerous than ignorance, and how confident authority figures can make devastating mistakes when they don't see the full picture. Pierre's outsider perspective mirrors our own - sometimes the obvious solution isn't the right one.
That's what happens. To understand what the author is really doing—and to discuss this chapter with confidence—keep reading.
Terms to Know
Redoubt
A small, temporary fortress built to defend a strategic position. Usually made of earth and timber, these were thrown up quickly during campaigns. In this chapter, Pierre sees the soon-to-be-famous Raevski Redoubt being constructed.
Modern Usage:
We see this in any defensive position built to protect something valuable - security checkpoints, barricades during protests, or even the way people arrange furniture to create barriers in their homes.
Flèches
Arrow-shaped earthwork fortifications that stick out from the main defensive line. They're designed to catch attackers in crossfire from multiple angles. Bennigsen inspects these incomplete fortifications during his tour.
Modern Usage:
Modern security uses the same principle - cameras and guards positioned at angles to cover each other's blind spots, or the way mall security is designed to watch from multiple vantage points.
Reconnaissance
Military scouting to gather information about enemy positions and terrain before battle. Bennigsen is conducting this inspection to assess Russian defensive positions and spot enemy movements.
Modern Usage:
Any time you scope out a situation before committing - checking out a new workplace before your first day, driving by a house before viewing it, or researching someone on social media before a date.
Chain of Command
The military hierarchy that determines who gives orders to whom. Bennigsen criticizes troop positions even though he's not the supreme commander, creating confusion about who's really in charge.
Modern Usage:
Every workplace has this - when a manager from another department tries to give you orders, or when multiple supervisors give conflicting instructions and you're stuck in the middle.
Tactical Deception
Military strategy where you deliberately hide your true intentions or capabilities to fool the enemy. The Russian troops were positioned as a hidden ambush, not obvious defenders.
Modern Usage:
Playing dumb to avoid extra work assignments, letting someone think they're winning an argument while you gather information, or keeping your real plans quiet until the right moment.
Armchair General
Someone who criticizes military strategy without understanding the full situation or having real responsibility. Pierre finds himself agreeing with Bennigsen's complaints despite knowing nothing about warfare.
Modern Usage:
Anyone who thinks they know better from the sidelines - sports fans yelling at the TV, people criticizing their boss's decisions without knowing the full picture, or Monday morning quarterbacking.
Characters in This Chapter
Pierre
Naive observer
Pierre tours the battlefield trying to understand military strategy but feels completely out of his depth. He agrees with Bennigsen's criticism mainly because he lacks confidence in his own judgment. His confusion mirrors the reader's experience of trying to make sense of complex situations.
Modern Equivalent:
The new employee nodding along in meetings they don't understand
Bennigsen
Overconfident critic
A general conducting reconnaissance who loudly criticizes troop positioning and orders changes, despite not being the supreme commander. His confidence masks his incomplete understanding of the battle plan, and his interference actually ruins a planned ambush.
Modern Equivalent:
The middle manager who swoops in to 'fix' things without understanding the full situation
Napoleon
Distant threat
Spotted in the distance with his staff, Napoleon represents the approaching danger that gives urgency to all the military preparations. His presence electrifies everyone observing him, even from afar.
Modern Equivalent:
The intimidating boss or authority figure whose mere presence changes the whole atmosphere
Murat
Enemy commander
One of Napoleon's marshals, possibly among the horsemen spotted near the enemy positions. His presence indicates the French are also conducting reconnaissance and preparing for battle.
Modern Equivalent:
The rival team's star player or the competition's top performer
Why This Matters
Connect literature to life
This chapter teaches how to recognize when someone's certainty about a complex situation might be masking crucial missing information.
Practice This Today
Next time someone confidently criticizes an existing system or process, ask yourself: 'What context might they be missing that would make the current approach sensible?'
You have the foundation. Now let's look closer.
Key Quotes & Analysis
"Pierre paid no special attention to it. He did not know that it would become more memorable to him than any other spot on the plain of Borodino."
Context: As Pierre passes the future Raevski Redoubt without realizing its significance
This shows how we often pass through moments that will later prove pivotal without recognizing their importance. The narrator's hindsight emphasizes how life's most significant experiences often seem ordinary at the time.
In Today's Words:
He had no idea this random spot would end up being the most important place he'd ever been.
"The officers said that either Napoleon or Murat was there, and they all gazed eagerly at this little group of horsemen."
Context: When the group spots enemy commanders in the distance
This captures how the presence of powerful figures creates fascination and anxiety even from afar. The uncertainty about which enemy leader they're seeing adds to the tension and shows how reputation precedes reality.
In Today's Words:
Everyone was rubbernecking trying to figure out if that was the big boss himself over there.
"But what do I know about it? Perhaps they are right, perhaps it's all nonsense that I think I agree with."
Context: Pierre's internal doubts after agreeing with Bennigsen's criticism
This reveals Pierre's fundamental insecurity about his own judgment and his tendency to defer to others. It's a relatable moment of self-doubt when trying to navigate unfamiliar territory.
In Today's Words:
What do I know? Maybe I'm just agreeing because it sounds smart, and I'm actually completely wrong.
Intelligence Amplifier™ Analysis
The Road of Confident Ignorance
The more certain someone appears about a complex situation, the more likely they are to be missing crucial information that would change their conclusion.
Thematic Threads
Authority
In This Chapter
Bennigsen exercises authority he doesn't technically have, overriding careful military planning because of his rank and confidence
Development
Building from earlier scenes of military hierarchy—now showing how authority can become destructive when divorced from full understanding
In Your Life:
You might see this when a confident supervisor changes systems without understanding why they exist in the first place
Knowledge
In This Chapter
Pierre's self-doubt about military matters contrasts with Bennigsen's false certainty—partial knowledge proves more dangerous than admitted ignorance
Development
Continues Pierre's journey of learning to trust his instincts while recognizing the limits of his understanding
In Your Life:
You might experience this when feeling intimidated by someone's confident explanations in areas where you lack expertise
Class
In This Chapter
Pierre's aristocratic status gives him access to military strategy discussions, but his outsider perspective makes him question what insiders accept
Development
Evolving from earlier themes about Pierre's awkward position in high society—now his outsider status becomes an advantage
In Your Life:
You might find this when your 'outsider' perspective at work helps you see problems that insiders have become blind to
Deception
In This Chapter
The hidden ambush strategy succeeds through deliberate misdirection—appearing weak to conceal strength
Development
Introduced here as a tactical concept that will likely have broader applications to human relationships
In Your Life:
You might encounter this when someone's apparent vulnerability or confusion is actually a strategic choice
Pride
In This Chapter
Bennigsen's professional pride prevents him from considering that he might not understand the full situation
Development
Continuing the theme of how pride blinds characters to important truths about themselves and their circumstances
In Your Life:
You might struggle with this when your expertise in one area makes you overconfident about related but different situations
Modern Adaptation
When the Expert Knows Best
Following Andrew's story...
Andrew accompanies his friend Marcus, a shift supervisor, on a walk-through of the warehouse before the busy holiday season. Marcus points out what he sees as obvious problems—why are the seasonal workers stationed near the loading dock instead of the main floor? It's clearly inefficient. Andrew nods along, feeling stupid for not seeing it himself. Marcus gets increasingly agitated, finally storming over to redirect the workers to what he considers better positions. The floor manager isn't around to explain, so Marcus takes charge. What neither Andrew nor Marcus knows is that those workers were deliberately placed there as part of a coordinated plan to handle the expected delivery surge—trucks would arrive faster than usual, and having workers right at the dock would prevent bottlenecks. Marcus's 'fix' creates exactly the chaos the original plan was designed to avoid. Andrew watches the disaster unfold, realizing that confidence and competence aren't the same thing.
The Road
The road Bennigsen walked in 1812, Andrew walks today. The pattern is identical: confident authority figures making changes without understanding the full picture, turning careful planning into chaos.
The Map
This chapter provides a navigation tool for recognizing when confidence masks ignorance. Andrew learns to ask 'What would make this current approach make sense?' before assuming something is wrong.
Amplification
Before reading this, Andrew might have automatically deferred to whoever sounded most certain. Now he can NAME confident ignorance, PREDICT when it leads to costly mistakes, and NAVIGATE it by staying curious even when experts seem sure.
You now have the context. Time to form your own thoughts.
Discussion Questions
- 1
Why does Bennigsen feel so confident about moving the troops, and what crucial information is he missing?
analysis • surface - 2
How does Pierre's self-doubt actually make him a better observer than Bennigsen in this situation?
analysis • medium - 3
Think of a time when someone confidently 'fixed' something at your workplace or home without understanding why it was set up that way. What happened?
application • medium - 4
When you feel absolutely certain something is wrong and needs immediate fixing, what questions should you ask yourself before taking action?
application • deep - 5
Why might expertise sometimes become a barrier to learning new information rather than an advantage?
reflection • deep
Critical Thinking Exercise
The Confidence Audit
Think of a situation where you recently felt very confident about a solution or opinion. Write down what you were certain about, then list three pieces of information you might have been missing. Consider what questions you could have asked before acting on your confidence.
Consider:
- •Focus on situations where you felt sure enough to give advice or take action
- •Consider who else might have had relevant information you didn't seek out
- •Think about whether your confidence came from expertise or just strong feelings
Journaling Prompt
Write about a time when someone else's confidence led to problems you could see coming. What did they miss that was obvious to you, and how might you avoid making similar blind spots in your own confident moments?
Coming Up Next...
Chapter 214: The Cold White Light of Truth
Moving forward, we'll examine facing mortality strips away life's illusions and reveals what truly matters, and understand crisis moments force us to see our past decisions with brutal clarity. These insights bridge the gap between classic literature and modern experience.