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CHAPTER XX Meanwhile Moscow was empty. There were still people in it, perhaps a fiftieth part of its former inhabitants had remained, but it was empty. It was empty in the sense that a dying queenless hive is empty. In a queenless hive no life is left though to a superficial glance it seems as much alive as other hives. The bees circle round a queenless hive in the hot beams of the midday sun as gaily as around the living hives; from a distance it smells of honey like the others, and bees fly in and out in the same way. But one has only to observe that hive to realize that there is no longer any life in it. The bees do not fly in the same way, the smell and the sound that meet the beekeeper are not the same. To the beekeeper’s tap on the wall of the sick hive, instead of the former instant unanimous humming of tens of thousands of bees with their abdomens threateningly compressed, and producing by the rapid vibration of their wings an aerial living sound, the only reply is a disconnected buzzing from different parts of the deserted hive. From the alighting board, instead of the former spirituous fragrant smell of honey and venom, and the warm whiffs of crowded life, comes an odor of emptiness and decay mingling with the smell of honey. There are no longer sentinels sounding the alarm with their abdomens raised, and ready to die...
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Summary
Tolstoy opens with one of literature's most powerful metaphors: Moscow as a dying, queenless hive. Through meticulous detail, he shows us how a beehive looks normal from the outside but reveals total collapse upon closer inspection. The bees still fly in and out, but there's no purpose, no coordination, no life force. Robber bees steal honey while the remaining workers crawl aimlessly, too weak to defend their home. The structure remains, but the spirit is gone. This extended metaphor perfectly captures Moscow's state after most residents fled Napoleon's approach. Napoleon himself paces outside the city, expecting the formal surrender that never comes. When told Moscow is empty, he's genuinely shocked. His grand theatrical moment—the 'coup de théâtre'—has fallen flat. Instead of triumphant entry into a surrendering capital, he faces an abandoned shell. The chapter reveals how devastating it can be when reality doesn't match our expectations, especially when we've built our entire strategy around those expectations. Napoleon's confusion mirrors anyone who's ever prepared for a confrontation that simply doesn't materialize. The empty city becomes a metaphor for hollow victories and the difference between conquering territory and conquering people. Tolstoy shows us that true power lies not in buildings or borders, but in the living spirit of a community—and when that spirit withdraws, even the mightiest conqueror is left holding nothing but empty shells.
That's what happens. To understand what the author is really doing—and to discuss this chapter with confidence—keep reading.
Terms to Know
Queenless hive
A beehive that has lost its queen bee and therefore its organizing principle and life force. The structure remains but the community dies from within. Tolstoy uses this as a metaphor for Moscow after most residents fled Napoleon's invasion.
Modern Usage:
We see this when companies lose strong leadership and employees just go through the motions, or when neighborhoods lose their sense of community after key families move away.
Coup de théâtre
A dramatic, theatrical moment designed to create maximum impact and surprise. Napoleon expected his entry into Moscow to be this kind of grand, show-stopping moment that would force Russian surrender.
Modern Usage:
Like when someone plans a big dramatic gesture to win back an ex, but the person has already moved on and doesn't care.
Robber bees
Bees from other hives that steal honey from weakened colonies that can't defend themselves. In Tolstoy's metaphor, these represent looters and opportunists who prey on Moscow's helpless state.
Modern Usage:
We see this during natural disasters when some people loot abandoned stores, or when scammers target elderly people who can't protect themselves.
Strategic withdrawal
A military tactic where you retreat not out of defeat, but to deny the enemy what they want most. The Russians abandoned Moscow to make Napoleon's victory meaningless.
Modern Usage:
Like when you stop engaging with toxic people instead of fighting them - you win by not playing their game.
Hollow victory
Winning something that turns out to be worthless because the real prize was never there. Napoleon conquered an empty city instead of forcing Russian surrender.
Modern Usage:
Getting a promotion at a company that's about to go bankrupt, or winning an argument with someone who's already decided to leave you.
Extended metaphor
A comparison that runs throughout an entire passage, with multiple detailed parallels. Tolstoy compares Moscow to a dying beehive for several paragraphs, matching each detail.
Modern Usage:
Like when someone describes their messy divorce as 'dismantling a business partnership' and keeps using business terms for every aspect.
Characters in This Chapter
Napoleon
Antagonist
He waits outside Moscow expecting a formal surrender that never comes. His shock at finding the city empty reveals how his entire strategy depended on Russian leaders behaving predictably.
Modern Equivalent:
The boss who expects everyone to be impressed by their authority but finds out the whole team has already mentally checked out
Why This Matters
Connect literature to life
This chapter teaches you to spot when someone is performing power for an audience that's already left the building.
Practice This Today
This week, notice when someone keeps escalating a conflict even though the other party has clearly checked out—watch for the moment when engagement becomes performance.
You have the foundation. Now let's look closer.
Key Quotes & Analysis
"Moscow was empty. There were still people in it, perhaps a fiftieth part of its former inhabitants had remained, but it was empty."
Context: Opening description of Moscow after most residents fled Napoleon's approach
This paradox captures how a place can be physically present but spiritually dead. Tolstoy shows that true emptiness isn't about numbers - it's about the absence of life force and community spirit.
In Today's Words:
The office still had some people working there, but everyone knew the company was done for.
"In a queenless hive no life is left though to a superficial glance it seems as much alive as other hives."
Context: Beginning of the extended beehive metaphor for Moscow's condition
This reveals Tolstoy's insight that surface appearances can be completely deceiving. What looks functional from the outside may be completely dead within.
In Today's Words:
From the outside everything looked normal, but anyone who looked closer could tell the heart had gone out of it.
"To the beekeeper's tap on the wall of the sick hive, instead of the former instant unanimous humming of tens of thousands of bees... the only reply is a disconnected buzzing from different parts of the deserted hive."
Context: Detailed comparison showing how the dying hive responds differently to stimuli
This shows how communities in collapse lose their ability to respond collectively. Instead of unified action, there's only scattered, weak individual responses.
In Today's Words:
When you tried to get everyone together for a meeting, instead of the usual energy you just got a few half-hearted responses from random people.
Intelligence Amplifier™ Analysis
The Road of Empty Victories
Building strategies that depend on others staying engaged in dynamics they can simply abandon.
Thematic Threads
Power
In This Chapter
Napoleon's power becomes meaningless when there's no one left to exercise it over
Development
Evolved from earlier displays of military might to this moment of hollow victory
In Your Life:
Your authority only works when people choose to recognize it
Expectations
In This Chapter
Napoleon's shock at finding Moscow empty reveals how rigid his expectations were
Development
Building on earlier themes of characters' assumptions being shattered by reality
In Your Life:
When you're too invested in how things 'should' go, you miss what's actually happening
Community
In This Chapter
The beehive metaphor shows that true strength lies in living connections, not structures
Development
Contrasts with earlier scenes of vibrant social gatherings and family bonds
In Your Life:
Buildings and titles mean nothing without the people who give them life
Strategy
In This Chapter
Napoleon's entire campaign assumed Moscow would behave like other conquered cities
Development
Shows how previous military successes created blind spots in planning
In Your Life:
Past victories can trap you in strategies that don't work for new situations
Identity
In This Chapter
Napoleon's identity as conqueror crumbles when there's nothing meaningful to conquer
Development
Parallels other characters whose self-image depends on external validation
In Your Life:
If your sense of self requires others to play specific roles, you're vulnerable to their choices
Modern Adaptation
When the Promotion Goes Sideways
Following Andrew's story...
Andrew had been working toward this moment for months. After selling his startup, he'd taken a consulting role at a struggling manufacturing company, convinced he could turn things around. He'd prepared presentations, drafted restructuring plans, imagined the grateful board meeting where they'd beg him to stay permanently as CEO. He'd even practiced his acceptance speech. But when he arrives for the big presentation, the parking lot is nearly empty. Half the board has resigned. The remaining executives are in emergency meetings about bankruptcy. The company isn't looking for a savior—it's looking for someone to turn off the lights. Andrew stands in the empty conference room, his polished slides glowing on the projector, addressing chairs that will never be filled. All his grand plans to rescue the company mean nothing when there's no company left to rescue.
The Road
The road Napoleon walked in 1812, Andrew walks today. The pattern is identical: building elaborate strategies around other people's expected reactions, only to discover they've removed themselves from the game entirely.
The Map
This chapter provides a crucial navigation tool: recognizing when your plans depend entirely on others staying engaged in a dynamic they might simply abandon. Andrew learns to ask: 'What if they just... don't show up?'
Amplification
Before reading this, Andrew might have kept doubling down on failed strategies, wondering why people weren't responding as expected. Now he can NAME the empty theater pattern, PREDICT when others might simply walk away, and NAVIGATE by building plans that don't require unwilling participants.
You now have the context. Time to form your own thoughts.
Discussion Questions
- 1
What does Tolstoy's beehive metaphor reveal about Moscow's condition when Napoleon arrives?
analysis • surface - 2
Why was Napoleon so shocked to find Moscow empty, and what does this tell us about his expectations?
analysis • medium - 3
When have you seen someone prepare for a confrontation or dramatic moment that never materialized because the other party simply walked away?
application • medium - 4
How would you handle a situation where your entire plan depends on someone else reacting in a specific way?
application • deep - 5
What does this chapter teach us about the difference between conquering territory and conquering people's hearts and minds?
reflection • deep
Critical Thinking Exercise
Map Your Expectation Traps
Think of a current situation where you're expecting someone to react in a specific way - maybe a difficult conversation you're planning, a confrontation you're dreading, or a dramatic moment you're anticipating. Write down what you expect to happen, then brainstorm three ways the other person could completely sidestep your expectations by simply not engaging as you predict.
Consider:
- •Are your plans dependent on others playing their assigned roles?
- •What would happen if the other person just... didn't show up to the drama?
- •How could you achieve your real goals without requiring specific reactions from others?
Journaling Prompt
Write about a time when you built up expectations for how someone would respond to you, only to have them react completely differently or not engage at all. What did that experience teach you about the difference between what we can control and what we can't?
Coming Up Next...
Chapter 250: When Authority Breaks Down
In the next chapter, you'll discover crisis reveals the fragility of social order and authority, and learn people make different moral choices under extreme pressure. These insights reveal timeless patterns that resonate in our own lives and relationships.