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CHAPTER II “He’s coming!” shouted the signaler at that moment. The regimental commander, flushing, ran to his horse, seized the stirrup with trembling hands, threw his body across the saddle, righted himself, drew his saber, and with a happy and resolute countenance, opening his mouth awry, prepared to shout. The regiment fluttered like a bird preening its plumage and became motionless. “Att-ention!” shouted the regimental commander in a soul-shaking voice which expressed joy for himself, severity for the regiment, and welcome for the approaching chief. Along the broad country road, edged on both sides by trees, came a high, light blue Viennese calèche, slightly creaking on its springs and drawn by six horses at a smart trot. Behind the calèche galloped the suite and a convoy of Croats. Beside Kutúzov sat an Austrian general, in a white uniform that looked strange among the Russian black ones. The calèche stopped in front of the regiment. Kutúzov and the Austrian general were talking in low voices and Kutúzov smiled slightly as treading heavily he stepped down from the carriage just as if those two thousand men breathlessly gazing at him and the regimental commander did not exist. The word of command rang out, and again the regiment quivered, as with a jingling sound it presented arms. Then amidst a dead silence the feeble voice of the commander in chief was heard. The regiment roared, “Health to your ex... len... len... lency!” and again all became silent. At first Kutúzov stood still while...
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Summary
General Kutúzov arrives to inspect the regiment, and we witness a masterclass in workplace politics and human nature. The regimental commander transforms into a nervous wreck, desperate to impress his superior, while his soldiers stand at rigid attention. Kutúzov moves through the ranks with the weary wisdom of someone who's seen it all before—he notices everything (especially the soldiers' worn-out boots) but chooses his battles carefully. The inspection reveals two fascinating character studies: Captain Timókhin, a good officer haunted by past mistakes, receives unexpected kindness from Kutúzov, while Dólokhov, the disgraced nobleman now serving as a common soldier, maintains his defiant dignity even in disgrace. Kutúzov sees through both men's facades—Timókhin's anxiety and Dólokhov's pride—and responds with surprising humanity. After the formal inspection ends, the regimental commander's relief is palpable as he tries to make amends with his subordinates. The chapter concludes with soldiers marching and singing, their spirits lifted by their officers' improved mood. Dólokhov encounters an old acquaintance from his privileged past, creating an awkward moment that highlights how far he's fallen. This scene brilliantly captures how organizational hierarchies work: the performative nature of inspections, the way anxiety travels down the chain of command, and how small gestures of recognition from leadership can transform morale. Tolstoy shows us that even in rigid military structures, individual character and human connection matter more than protocol.
That's what happens. To understand what the author is really doing—and to discuss this chapter with confidence—keep reading.
Terms to Know
Chain of command
The military hierarchy where orders flow down from top to bottom, and everyone has a specific rank and role. In this chapter, we see how the regimental commander becomes nervous when his superior arrives to inspect. The pressure and anxiety travel down through each level of leadership.
Modern Usage:
Every workplace has this - your manager gets stressed when their boss visits, then that stress trickles down to you.
Inspection
A formal review where a superior examines troops, equipment, and performance. It's part theater, part genuine assessment. Everyone knows it's coming, so they prepare intensively, but the real test is how they handle the unexpected moments.
Modern Usage:
Like when corporate visits your store, or when the health inspector shows up at a restaurant - everyone scrambles to look perfect.
Military bearing
The way soldiers are expected to carry themselves - straight posture, controlled emotions, respectful demeanor. It's about projecting strength and discipline even when you're nervous or uncomfortable inside.
Modern Usage:
Professional presence in any job - how you compose yourself in meetings, interviews, or when dealing with difficult customers.
Fallen from grace
When someone loses their high social position due to scandal or mistakes. Dólokhov was once a privileged nobleman but is now serving as a common soldier because of his past behavior. He maintains his pride despite his reduced circumstances.
Modern Usage:
Like a former executive now working entry-level after a scandal, or someone who lost their professional license and had to start over.
Reading the room
Understanding the unspoken dynamics and emotions in a situation. Kutúzov demonstrates this skill by knowing when to be stern, when to show kindness, and how to handle different personalities appropriately.
Modern Usage:
Essential workplace skill - knowing when your boss is having a bad day, or sensing when a customer needs extra patience.
Performative leadership
When authority figures put on a show of being in charge rather than actually leading effectively. The regimental commander's nervous shouting and dramatic gestures are more about appearing commanding than being truly confident.
Modern Usage:
Managers who yell to seem tough, or bosses who micromanage to look busy rather than trusting their team.
Characters in This Chapter
Kutúzov
Wise superior
The commanding general who arrives for the inspection. He moves with calm authority, notices important details like worn-out boots, and shows unexpected kindness to both the anxious Captain Timókhin and the disgraced Dólokhov. His experience allows him to see through people's facades to their true character.
Modern Equivalent:
The seasoned executive who's seen everything and leads with quiet confidence rather than drama
Regimental commander
Anxious middle manager
The officer in charge of the regiment who becomes extremely nervous when his superior arrives. He shouts commands, fusses over details, and desperately wants to make a good impression. After the inspection, he's visibly relieved and tries to make amends with his subordinates.
Modern Equivalent:
The district manager who panics when corporate visits and makes everyone's life miserable with last-minute demands
Captain Timókhin
Competent but worried subordinate
A good officer who's haunted by some past mistake and fears he'll be punished during the inspection. Kutúzov recognizes his worth and treats him with unexpected kindness, which lifts his spirits considerably.
Modern Equivalent:
The reliable employee who made one big mistake and now constantly worries they'll be fired
Dólokhov
Proud fallen aristocrat
A former nobleman now serving as a common soldier due to past scandals. He maintains his dignity and defiant attitude despite his reduced circumstances. When he encounters someone from his privileged past, the awkwardness highlights how far he's fallen.
Modern Equivalent:
The former high-level professional now working a basic job after a career scandal but still carrying themselves with pride
Why This Matters
Connect literature to life
This chapter teaches how to recognize when anxiety travels down organizational hierarchies and how authentic leaders cut through performance to see what matters.
Practice This Today
This week, notice when someone above you in the hierarchy gets nervous—watch how that anxiety spreads to everyone below them, and practice staying grounded in your actual competence rather than joining the performance.
You have the foundation. Now let's look closer.
Key Quotes & Analysis
"The regiment fluttered like a bird preening its plumage and became motionless."
Context: Describing how the soldiers prepare themselves as their commanding general approaches
This beautiful metaphor captures the nervous energy and last-minute adjustments everyone makes when the boss arrives. It shows how even disciplined soldiers are still human beings who want to look their best when being evaluated.
In Today's Words:
Everyone quickly fixed their hair and straightened their uniforms when they saw the big boss coming.
"Kutúzov smiled slightly as treading heavily he stepped down from the carriage just as if those two thousand men breathlessly gazing at him and the regimental commander did not exist."
Context: Kutúzov's calm arrival contrasts sharply with everyone else's nervous energy
This shows true leadership confidence - Kutúzov doesn't need to put on a show because he's secure in his authority. His casual demeanor actually makes him more impressive, not less. He's comfortable with power.
In Today's Words:
He got out of the car like it was just another Tuesday, completely unbothered by all the people stressing out about impressing him.
"At first Kutúzov stood still while the regiment presented arms, then he and the general began walking between the ranks."
Context: The formal inspection begins after the initial ceremony
This shows the ritual nature of workplace hierarchy - there are specific steps and ceremonies that must be followed. But the real work happens during the informal moments when Kutúzov actually observes his people.
In Today's Words:
First they did the official stuff everyone expected, then he actually started paying attention to what was really going on.
Intelligence Amplifier™ Analysis
The Performance Anxiety Chain
When authority figures arrive to judge performance, anxiety cascades down hierarchies, creating desperate people-pleasing that often backfires.
Thematic Threads
Class
In This Chapter
Dólokhov maintains dignity despite being reduced from nobleman to common soldier, while others treat him awkwardly
Development
Deepening exploration of how class identity persists even when circumstances change
In Your Life:
You might see this when former managers become your peers, or when family members experience financial changes
Identity
In This Chapter
Each character performs a role—the nervous commander, the wise general, the proud fallen noble—rather than simply being themselves
Development
Continuing theme of how social situations force us into performed versions of ourselves
In Your Life:
You might recognize this when you act differently around your boss versus your coworkers, or with family versus friends
Recognition
In This Chapter
Kutúzov's small gesture of kindness to Timókhin transforms the captain's entire emotional state and confidence
Development
Building on earlier themes about how acknowledgment from authority figures carries disproportionate weight
In Your Life:
You might experience this when a supervisor finally notices your good work, or when a doctor actually listens to your concerns
Power
In This Chapter
The regimental commander's anxiety reveals how those in middle management are often most vulnerable to pressure from above
Development
Expanding understanding of how power structures create stress at every level, not just the bottom
In Your Life:
You might see this in charge nurses, department supervisors, or team leads who seem harder on their staff when upper management is watching
Authenticity
In This Chapter
Only after the inspection ends do people return to their natural selves, singing and relaxing
Development
Introduced here—the contrast between performed and authentic behavior
In Your Life:
You might notice this in how differently people act during formal meetings versus casual conversations afterward
Modern Adaptation
When the Big Boss Shows Up
Following Andrew's story...
Andrew's been managing the community center for six months when the city council announces a surprise inspection. His staff—already stretched thin running after-school programs on a shoestring budget—suddenly panic about every detail. The janitor frantically scrubs floors that were already clean. The youth counselors rehearse scripted responses about 'measurable outcomes.' Andrew finds himself obsessing over paperwork while ignoring that half the kids don't have proper winter coats. When Councilwoman Martinez arrives, she cuts through the performance immediately. She notices the worn basketball hoops and asks real questions about what the kids actually need. She pulls aside James, a volunteer who'd been written up for being 'too casual' with the teens, and thanks him for connecting with a troubled kid everyone else had given up on. Meanwhile, she barely glances at Andrew's perfectly organized budget reports. After she leaves, the whole staff deflates with relief, and Andrew realizes he'd been so focused on looking competent that he'd forgotten what competence actually meant.
The Road
The road Kutúzov's regimental commander walked in 1805, Andrew walks today. The pattern is identical: when someone with power over our livelihood arrives to judge us, we abandon authentic competence for desperate performance.
The Map
This chapter provides a navigation tool for surviving inspections and evaluations. Andrew learns to focus on substance over show, and to recognize that good leaders see through theatrics to what really matters.
Amplification
Before reading this, Andrew might have gotten swept up in the performance anxiety, micromanaging his staff and losing sight of his actual mission. Now he can NAME the inspection theater, PREDICT how anxiety cascades down hierarchies, and NAVIGATE by staying grounded in his real work.
You now have the context. Time to form your own thoughts.
Discussion Questions
- 1
Why does the regimental commander become so nervous when Kutúzov arrives, and how does his anxiety affect everyone under him?
analysis • surface - 2
What does Kutúzov notice that the nervous commander misses, and why does this matter for understanding good leadership?
analysis • medium - 3
Think about your workplace or school - when does this same 'inspection anxiety' happen, and how do people change their behavior?
application • medium - 4
How would you handle being inspected by someone who controls your future, based on what Kutúzov teaches us about seeing through performances?
application • deep - 5
What does this chapter reveal about the difference between performing competence and actually being competent?
reflection • deep
Critical Thinking Exercise
Map Your Power Dynamic
Think of a situation where someone with authority over you (boss, teacher, parent, landlord) is coming to evaluate your performance. Draw or write out the chain reaction: how does their presence change you, and how does your changed behavior affect others around you? Then identify what really matters versus what you're tempted to perform.
Consider:
- •Notice the difference between what you worry they'll judge versus what actually affects your performance
- •Consider how your anxiety might be making you overlook important things (like Kutúzov noticing the worn boots)
- •Think about whether this person is more like the nervous commander or the wise Kutúzov in how they evaluate others
Journaling Prompt
Write about a time when you were being evaluated and either got caught up in the performance or managed to stay grounded in your actual competence. What did you learn about handling pressure from authority figures?
Coming Up Next...
Chapter 31: When Bad News Arrives
As the story unfolds, you'll explore to read between the lines in tense professional conversations, while uncovering maintaining dignity under pressure builds respect. These lessons connect the classic to contemporary challenges we all face.